Sunday, June 10, 2012

FLASH FACTORY FRIDAY #7 - WINNER!


Congratulations! 


THIS WEEK'S WINNER IS: 
Rebekah Postupak!!! 


From H.L. Pauff:
It was a difficult decision as there were some really great entries this week, but I have to go with Rebekah Postupak's entry. I absolutely love the strong voice of the character and you learn so much about her in so few words. 
Great job and congrats!  


Here's Rebekah's story: 

I want vengeance. Crave it. THIRST for it, do you hear me? Those vicious hooligans—no, vandals! delinquents!—have deprived me for the last time, and I’m taking my own back.

Please understand, I am normally an easy-going kind of woman. Years of pain and abuse (yes, I dare use that word, ABUSE!) have melted my unyielding steel into pathetic, worthless, rippable aluminum foil. I hate myself for it, but at least in allowing the suffering day after uncomplaining day, I’ve managed to fashion a kind of peace between myself and my tormenters. It’s not a real peace, of course, but it’s the only way I’ve found to survive this life.

Until today.

No more.

They are hammering at the door, demanding entry. Their furious shouts make the walls tremble. I hear the white rage of their strategizing, feel it seeping beneath the door and across the cold, hard floor, where it’s now crawling up my legs. I tremble too, tears stinging the corners of my eyes, but I will.not.give.in

Never again.

My house. 

My bathroom.




Congratulations, and thank you for entering!  

You'll get to pick the three word prompt for next week's challenge (or switch it up with a picture), AND be the judge!  Please send me an email so I can send you the "get to know the judges" questions.  
Email: emailjessarusso [at] gmail [dot] com   

BIG thanks to this week's judge, H.L. Pauff!!! 

1 comment:

  1. Rebekah PostupakJune 10, 2012 at 5:36 PM

    Ten points if you can guess where this piece was written.

    And why.

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